Sinful ? : number3

I used the word 'darkness' for telling my depressive status
in this poem, and also 'toward the light' meant 'I want to
be brighter'.
But my English conversation teacher pointed out that
'darkness' could be associated with sin, and
'toward the light' could mean 'I am repenting of my sin'.
I don't want the poem to have such a religious meaning.
So, I revised it as following.


(number 3 revision 1)
Del Sol

Came with a stomachful of dark clouds.
Came without any appetite.
Came here with no reason.

A bite of the Salad tasted of the light.
The dark clouds disappeared.
Each slice of the Pizza tasted of the sun,
Made me hungrier by the bite.

Del Sol, a cooker of the sun,

Reminded me,
To walk in the light.