Saturday, May 7, 2011

Step forward : number 2

During May holidays, I mended my book shelves
and arranged back the books which had been lying
all over my room.
Somehow I could get back my life as it used to be.
The following is my second poem.
Please check it and post comments if you like
on anything you notice.
I would appreciate your help and advice.


(number 2 revision 0)
A shelter for you

Shining stars twinkle so high,
Silent night, dark quiet night.
Rosy cheeks look up to the sky.
Surprisingly calm,
In a blacked-out night.

Little flames flicker in your eyes,
Silent night, shiver-shivery night.
Tiny hands hang on tight.
Wonderfully cozy,
In an earthquake night.

Dogs' howling sound so far,
Silent night, long lasting night.
With your breathing heard softer.
We are at peace,
Even if the morning birds never sing.

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