Thank you, john01e and Baz, for posting comments.
I realized that I was so ignorant about English poems
and my poem had a strong taste like a Haiku.
This attempt might be reckless of me,
but please let me continue a little more.
I read about 'rhyme' 'iamb' 'Tetrameter' etc,
but they are so tough to understand.
First I tried to add some rhymes on my poem.
Please check it again.
(number 1 revision 1)
Over the Wave
Oh, your heart
Floats on the tide.
May your heart
Lie on the pride,
And have dreams
In snow flakes.
Oh, my heart
Sticks to the shores.
May my heart
Survive the tears,
No more dreams
In rain drops.
Oh, our hearts
Become a pair.
May our hearts
Dance in the air,
And have steps
In cherry blossoms
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