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who used my account.
I revised the nember 6 as following:
(number 6 : revision 1)
After the typhoon
Just after the rain stopped,
Lot's of bicycles rushed out
From the big high-school gate.
A yellow umbrella turned around
With a little girl under it.
The sky regained bright blue.
Strong winds still blew.
Just after the road dried,
Lot's of spots appeared
All around the sidewalk.
A yellow umbrella fell from
The hand of the little girl.
Surprised to see pressed tiny frogs,
Flattened creatures with four legs.
Just after the typhoon went by.
Just after the typhoon went by.
The sky regained bright blue.
Strong winds still blew.
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A yellow umbrella turned around with a little girl under it.
Lot's of spots appeared.
the yellow umbrella fell from the hand of the little girl.
Surprised to see pressed tiny frogs,
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